Speaking from experience crit 2.

Issues raised: Lot of work to get done in terms of doing a guide for each city. Maybe do one full magazine, then 1 page for the others to propose what they would look like. Look at 'wallpaper' guide - simple but engaging graphics.
Action to be taken: Visuals for layouts.
Think about typefaces. Look at publications that I like the feel of - even books and try to emulate and reflect in my work - it will give me more of a focus.

Reflection: Very helpful and insightful crit - really given me a focus to work on now and I feel more confident in myself that I can actually do this now - as I have been worrying about how to resolve/whether or not I was on the right track etc.