Comments from the crit - with Brian, Dutch and Ceara:
The post it image - would it work better with handwritten type? (I have to agree actually - shown with some re-trys above - it looks more human).
Ceara mentioned that they might all look better in black and white - which I think would make them look more of a series.
Dutch commented that it might look better if the boot shoelace was connected better to the type -I originally thought this when putting the piece together but wanted the lace to connect in the centre of the word so as not to add any unnecessary lace hanging over the top and feel messy.
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